题目内容
【题目】近年来,网络筹款(Online fundraising)作为一种新型捐款方式出现在人们的视野中。由于网络筹款能让网民迅捷地获知求助信息且捐款方便,人们通过“爱心筹”、“轻松筹”这些网络平台为不少急需帮助的人雪中送炭,帮他们渡过了难关。然而随着许多网络筹款骗局的揭露,如“罗一笑事件”的发酵与炒作,一些网民对网络筹款的真实性及透明度提出质疑,并表示网络筹款不能成为骗捐的温床。针对这一话题,九年级一班的同学们展开了讨论。
假如你是正方或反方的一员(只需选择一方),请围绕你的观点,结合亲身经历来说服同学们。
要求:1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】With the development of the Internet, there are more and more online fundraising on it. In my opinion, online fundraising is necessary if we can identify the truth.
Last term, my classmate’s mom had a serious illness and was in hospital for a long time, which almost ran out of all their savings. She was so sad that she couldn’t concentrate her mind on study, so I decided to help her. I tried sending messages to the network platform to ask for help. To my surprise, it did work and I received feedback. So I encouraged other classmates to repost my message and make sure the truth of it. Three days later, my classmates collected enough money to afford her mother’s medical expense. Later, her mother recovered well, and she appreciated those people who helped her so much.
As you see, online fundraising is really helpful and necessary for us, which can give others a hand in time.
【解析】
这是一篇开放性话题作文,结合自己的亲身经历,谈一谈对“网络筹款(Online fundraising)” 这一种新型捐款方式的认识,需要考生充分发挥自己的想象力,创造和思维能力。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示去认真审题,选择是作为正方还是的反方的一员,确定出文章的中心。根据提供的英语词组去选择组织材料,列出写作提纲,结合所给材料,可知本文主要会用到两种时态,一般现在时态及一般过去时态。人称为第一人称,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。