Question

8．良好的习惯成就美好的未来．作为青少年，如何培养良好的习惯呢？请根据以下内容提示以"How to Develop Good Habits"为题写一篇英语短文．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
内容提示：（1）上课认真听讲，做笔记；  
（2）每天按时完成作业；
（3）闲暇时多读课外书籍；       
（4）每周锻炼3至4次；
（5）多吃蔬菜、水果，少吃垃圾食品；
（6）补充一至两点良好的习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响．
要求：（1）要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译．
（2）文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分．
How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to have a good habit．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇说明文，要用一般现在时态；话题是"如何培养良好的习惯"，内容包括：良好习惯有哪些？如何培养？对我们有什么影响？在提出"培养良好的习惯"的建议时，可用表示建议的表达方式：should/shouldn't…；had better…；It's necessary to do sth．等等．

解答 写作范文：It's very important for us to develop good habits．As teenagers，what should we do？In my opinion，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day．In spare time，we had better read some books to get more knowledge．Also，we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food．It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week．What's more，to get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late．Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean．Exercise is fun and relaxing．It's healthy for the mind and body．Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily．

点评 为了使文章结构紧凑，自然流畅，段落之间要使用适当的过度语，句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词．如：also；what's more；in my opinion等．