Question

5．生活中，一定会有很多让你难忘的人或事．请你用英语记录最让你感动的人或事，以"A person I will never forget"为题，写一篇英语短文．
要求如下：1．短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等；
2．短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名.3．词数80左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文，写作时，要确定好所写的人或事，列出要点．注意人称和时态，以第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：play with sb 和某人一起玩
make sth+形容词，让…怎么样
be strict with sb对某人要求严格
allow sb to do sth让某人做某事
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．
句中I'll never forget作person的定语，是一个限制性定语从句．
He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．
句中what连接宾语从句，作know的宾语．

解答 A person I will never forget
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher．【高分句型】He's a tall man with thick glasses．He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us．He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting．He's kind but is strict with us．【外貌、性格、爱好】He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．【高分句型】He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without．My English has greatly improved with his help．【难忘之处】

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．