Question

假如你是Alice, 你想写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Daniel获得今年的新星奖。推荐

信字数为100词左右。开头，结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Excellent qualities （优秀的品质）	Good examples （好的事例）
乐于助人	1．经常帮助邻居修电脑； 2．……（至少一点）
聪明	1．学东西快，努力学习各门学科； 2．野营时甚至会搭建帐篷。
勇敢	一个周日的早晨，他像往常一样，坐在湖边看书。突然听到一个女孩大声呼救，他跳进湖里，把小女孩从水里救了上来，并送她回家。
……	……（至少两句）

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. ______________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

He is also clever.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

He is brave, too.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Sir / Madam:

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Sta Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his neighbours fix computers. He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.

He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.

He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he heard a girl calling for help. He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home.

Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. (He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need.)

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容推荐Daniel 获得今年的新星奖，内容应包括表格内所有的信息。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了also, when, at last等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:would like to, look forward to, take part in等。

考点：提纲作文。