Question

【题目】书面表达。

请根据以下线索写一篇句意连贯的小故事。

1.我婶婶一直和她的一个新邻居相处得不好，婶婶说他看起来很不友好;

2.一天，我婶婶回到家，发现她昨天刚买的项链不见了;

3.她回想自己去过哪儿，觉得可能是那个邻居偷了她的项链，因此她决定立刻报警;

4.突然有人敲门，原来是她的新邻居;

5.他手里拿着项链，说昨天在门口发现的;

6.婶婶很感激他，并愿意和他交朋友。

Answer 1

【答案】My aunt got along well with all her neighbours except the man who lived next door. My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all.

One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She recalled where she had been just then. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her necklace. So she planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone knocked at the door. It was the young man, her new neighbour. She was shocked that her necklace was in his hand. He told her that he found it at the doorway. And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it.

Yes, that's true. It was the necklace that my aunt lost. My aunt was very thankful. She told her new neighbour that they could be good friends later.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如get along well with，next door，at all，the day before，just then，at once，knock at，in his hand，at the doorway等。而My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all./ One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before./ And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。