Question

1．你梦想中的学校是怎样的？请发挥你充分的想象力，以My Dream School为题，分别从学校的大小、建筑、学科、作业、活动以及老师和学生等方面来描述一下你梦想中的学校．不少于70词．
要求：
1．条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2．提示内容全部体现在文章中；
3．不少于70词．
My Dream School
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．
句中"that has many kinds of books"在句中做定语从句，修饰"library"．这句话意为：那里将会有一个有很多种类书的图书馆．
高分句型二：
I hope I can study in such a school．
句中"I can study in such a school．"在句中做宾语从句，这句话意为：我希望我能在这样的学校学习．

解答 My dream school will be big and beautiful with lots of trees and flowers．We will have a great time in such a school．（开篇点题）
There will be some tall buildings and a great playground．It will have a big library that has many kinds of books．【高分句型一】We will be able to read and study in it．The teachers will be kind and friendly．They will play with us after class．There will be more activities for us to enjoy．We will have fewer subjects to learn and less homework to do．Everyone will have a computer in the classroom．We will do our homework on the Internet．（介绍未来的学校）
This is what my dream school will be like．I hope I can study in such a school．【高分句型二】（期待未来）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．