Question

【题目】Ⅴ. 书面表达

假定你是李华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。

To: lihua@ china. com

From: davidsmith@ Britain. com

Subject: School life

Dear Li Hua， Glad to hear you're graduating from junior high. I'm interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? ●What do you like best about your school life? ●What’s the biggest problem as a junior student? ●Who has helped you most? And why? ●Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not? I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best， David

注意:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;

2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David，

Thank you so much for your email. I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.

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Best wishes，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

Thank you so much for your email, I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.

I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club.

Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

However, I’ve also made some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who helped me most in the junior high.

In all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colorful and meaningful.

How about your school life ? Write to me soon.

Best wishes,

Su Hua

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是一封邮件，结合所给的写作材料，写出初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态、现在完成时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中made quite a few friends, moreover, however， between... and... , in all, best wishes 等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了定语从句、原因状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。