假设你是李华.一名九年级学生．请你给英国朋友Stephen 发一封电子邮件．就你的个人爱好所带来的困惑和他进行交流并请求帮助．要点:李华爱好对太空旅行感兴趣,经常到图书馆阅读资料．困惑得不到老师的理解．观点①个人爱好有助于学习,②-老师观点时间应花在功课上．注意:①80词左右.开头和结尾已给出.但不记入总词数,②内容� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假设你是李华，一名九年级学生．请你给英国朋友Stephen 发一封电子邮件．就你的个人爱好所带来的困惑和他进行交流并请求帮助．要点：

李华	爱好	对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料．
	困惑	得不到老师的理解．
	观点	①个人爱好有助于学习； ②…
老师	观点	时间应花在功课上．

注意：
①80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不记入总词数；
②内容须包括上表中的要求提示，可作适当发挥；
③条理清楚，语句连贯；文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
Dear Stephen，
I am a Grade 9student．I am writing to tell you about my problem．

What should I do？Can you offer me some suggestions？I am looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Li Hua．

分析这是一篇图表作文．内容是就自己的个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
一、爱好：对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料
二、困惑：得不到老师理解
三、观点：1．个人爱好有助于学习；
2．…（至少一点）
四、老师的观点：时间应花在功课上；
常用到的重点短语：
be crazy about对…痴迷
make sb+adj让某人怎么样
spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
between…and…在…和…之间（两者之间）

【高分句型】
1．①In my spare time I often go to the library ②to find something ③to read．
①in one's spare time 在某人的业余时间
②to find something动词不定式做目的状语
③to read．做后置定语，修饰something．
2．①If I can achieve a balance ②between my schoolwork and my hobby，it will ③be of great value to my future development．
①if引导的条件状语从句，主将从现．
②between…and…在…和…之间，介词短语．
③be of great value=be valuable，有价值的…
3．But I don't think my teacher understands me．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句，主语是I，谓语动词是think，故将从句的否定转移到主句，含义是我认为我的老师不理解我．

解答 Dear Stephen，
I am a Grade 9student．I am writing to tell you about my problem．
You know I am crazy about space travel．In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read．【高分句型】（爱好）This makes my teacher very angry．（困惑）To him，good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons，even at weekends．（老师的观点）
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies．If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby，it will be of great value to my future development．【高分句型】But I don't think my teacher understands me．【高分句型】I feel bad about that．（我的观点）
What should I do？Can you offer me some suggestions？I am looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Li Hua．

点评这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文．本文所给材料比较详细：要求介绍自己的爱好，及困惑，并阐述自己的爱好的观点，及老师的观点．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强．首先表达自己的爱好，然后描述老师的观点看法，表达自己的困惑．之后阐述自己的观点，请求帮助．适当的连词，流畅的语言，为文章增色不少．

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