Question

【题目】假如你是刚踏入中学校门的学生Anne，请根据提示信息，写一封邮件给你的笔友Peter，介绍你的校园生活。80词左右，可以适当发挥。

提示信息：

1．在七年级三班学习，家离学校很近，每天步行上学。

2．最喜欢的科目是英语和科学。很喜欢校园生活。身边有许多好友。老师们都很友好。

3．擅长唱歌和游泳，课后经常参加(take part in)各种各样的活动(activity)。

4．学习很努力，梦想是当一名老师。

Dear Peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about my school life.

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Best wishes,

Anne

Answer 1

【答案】

(One possible version)

Dear Peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about my school life. I study in Class Three, Grade Seven. I live close to my school, so I often go to school on foot. My favourite subjects are English and Science. I enjoy my school life very much and I have many good friends. All my teachers are very friendly. I'm good at singing and swimming, I often take part in different kinds of activities after class. I'm hard-working. My dream is to be a teacher. What about you, Tom?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,

Anne

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一封回信来介绍自己的校园生活，并谈谈自己的一些感受。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合来信内容可知，回信中需要就安徽的公交服务去重点描述。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。各种短语句型表达的使用非常准确，固定短语“be good at doing sth,take part in sth, different kinds of,”以及复合句“I live close to my school, so I often go to school on foot.的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。