Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你好友Lily写信告诉你,她的妈妈在网上买了一款集中注意力的头环，让她在学习的时候戴在头上。她戴久了会头疼，又不知道如何和妈妈沟通。请你就这个问题给Lily提出一些可行性的建议。

内容要点：1. 头环可以让你妈妈及时了解你的情况；

2. 头环不一定舒服,但是妈妈原本是想帮你；

3. 你应该让你妈妈了解你的真实感受；

4. 沟通方式(至少一条建议)。

参考词汇：头环 head ring 集中注意力 focus attention

注意：

1. 内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥

2. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Dear Lily

Lots of teenagers may meet the same problem – not knowing how to communicate with parents.

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Yours

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lily

Lots of teenagers may meet the same problem - not knowing how to communicate with parents.

Your mum would like to know your situation so she bought you that head ring. I know that the head ring can help you focus attention, but it also makes you feel uncomfortable while wearing it for a long time. However, your mum really wants to help you. Mum always loves children, so you should let her know your feelings.

If you don’t know how to talk about it with her, you can write a letter to her or you can send her messages on the phone.

Hope my ideas can help you.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求就Lily的苦恼回信提出一些可行性的建议，属于书信类写作。作者开篇明确话题Lots of teenagers may meet the same problem - not knowing how to communicate with parents，接着就Lily母亲的做法表明看法并提出一些可行性的建议，最后表明希望Hope my ideas can help you.。