Question

【题目】假如你是林涛，你班同学李明患病住院已有三周。请你给他发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

1.询问病情 2.介绍班级近期活动或学习情况:参加了运动会，获得了一等奖；现在正为歌咏比赛做准备。 3。表达祝愿

提示词语：miss exciting pity busy help

Dear Li Ming,

Yours

Lin Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

It is three weeks since you were in hospital in Zhengzhou .How are you feeling now. We all miss you very much. Recently we have many activities. We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first prize. The matches were exciting. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity！You didn’t watch them. I hope you’ll get well soon and come bake earlier. We are busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practice a song every day in order to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and don’t worry about your lessons. I’ll help you with them.

Best wishes.

Yours

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。主要内容包括1.询问病情 2.介绍班级近期活动或学习情况 3.帮他补课 4表达祝愿四方面的内容，注意写作时时态的变化。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态应用准确，过去时态，将来时态，一般现在时三种时态的应用使表达更准确。