Question

10．越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大危害．作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（100词左右）
内容提示：
1 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线．
2 别在街道或马路上玩耍和踢球．
3 劝父母不能酒后驾车．
你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然．
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注：第一段已给出，不计入总词数．
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．
                                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life随着越来越多的汽车走进我们的家庭，我们很高兴它大大改善了我们的生活．这是由with引导的伴随状语，意思是"随着…"，we are happy that是一个主系表结构的句式，后面引导一个表语从句，后面是现在完成时，表示对现在造成的影响．
高分句型二：For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast例如，我们必须走在一边，当我们过斑马线时，停止，看右，左，然后快速经过．这是由when引导的时间状语从句，for example是一个固定短语，意思是例如．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life（高分句型一）（开门见山说明汽车的积极作用）．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents（说明汽车带来的负面作用）．
        Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast（高分句型二）．Don't play football on the road．we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving．（具体阐明我们的作法）
        We can say cars are coming into our life，but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safely driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．（总结全文）

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．