Question

20．理想是指路明灯，所以人人都会有梦想．你的梦想是什么？为什么会有这样的梦想？怎样才能实现呢？请以My dream为题写写你的梦想．
要求：1．文中不得出现真实的人名和学校．2．字数80词左右．
My dream
Everyone has his own dream．My dream is to become a teacher．
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．But I decide to study harder from now on．I am sure my dream will come true．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以My dream为题写写你的梦想．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1你的梦想是什么？
2为什么会有这样的梦想？
3怎样才能实现呢？
常用到的重点短语：
thanks to sb 幸亏某人
at the same time同时
spend+时间 on sth花时间做某事
decide to do sth决定去做某事
from now on从现在开始
do one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
高分句型：
1．Teachers can not teach us many things at school，①but they②do their best to teach us③how to learn．
①but表转折，连接前后两个句子．
②do one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
③how to learn，是疑问词+to do 结构，作为teach的宾语．
2．I know①②it is not easy to make my dream come true．
①省略了that的宾语从句，作为know的宾语．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的．it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 Everyone has his own dream．My dream is to become a teacher．（点题）
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．（高分句型）Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．（为什么会有这样的梦想）I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．（高分句型）But I decide to study harder from now on．（怎样实现梦想）I am sure my dream will come true．（总结全文）

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．