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13．从外貌、性格、学习及业余爱好等方面，相像一下你和你的好朋友之间的相同和不同之处．请用英语加以描写，要用到形容词或副词的比较级形式，也可能用到最高级形式．文中不能出现真实的人名．
要求：1．词数70左右．2．要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确．
My good friend and I
I like to have friends who are different from me．My best friend is Tom．In some ways we look the same，and in some ways we look different．We both have black eyes and black hair．We are both thin，butTom is much thinner．he is taller，more outgoing than me．And he is really more hard-working than me．I am good at English but he does well in math．We like playing basketball．Both he and I like sports show．But I like watching cartoon films，she likes watching talk show．I am lazier than him，Heis never late for class，But I always get up late．I think differences are not important in a friendship．
Although we have some differences，we are good friends．Our friendship will last forever．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I like to have friends who are different from me我喜欢拥有和我不同的朋友．
who are different from me作为定语从句，修饰friends．
【高分句型二】
Although we have some differences，we are good friends虽然我们有些不同，但是我们是好朋友．
although引导的让步状语从句．

解答 My good friend and I
I like to have friends who are different from me【高分句型一】．My best friend is Tom．In some ways we look the same，and in some ways we look different．We both have black eyes and black hair．We are both thin，but Tom is much thinner．he is taller，more outgoing than me．（外貌和性格）And he is really more hard-working than me．I am good at English but he does well in math．（学习）We like playing basketball．Both he and I like sports show．But I like watching cartoon films，she likes watching talk show．（爱好）I am lazier than him，He is never late for class，But I always get up late． I think differences are not important in a friendship．
Although we have some differences，we are good friends．【高分句型二】Our friendship will last forever．

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