Question

7．假设你的名字是Li Ping，请用英文给加拿大学生 David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
进行简要自我介绍
性别与年龄（或出生年份）
业余爱好（比如音乐和足球等）
5年前开始学习英语
将于今年9月进入高中
希望今后你们能经常交流，互相有更多的了解，盼望他的回复．
注意：
1．文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名，地名或校名．
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
3．词数70-110，开头，结尾和部分要点已给出，不计入总词数．

Dear David
On the internet I got the information that you are looking for a Chinese student as your pen-pal．
First of all，let me introduce myself to you．Born in April，2001，I am an outgoing boy/girl in a beautiful city in north China．This September，I am entering senior high school．I like music and soccer，which help me relax after tiring school days．As for my subjects，I like English best．And I don't think there will be too much trouble for us to communicate because I have learned English forfive years．
I hope we can know more about each other and become good friends as soon as possible．
Yours
Li ping．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是给加拿大学生 David发一封电子邮件进行简要自我介绍．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．性别与年龄（或出生年份）
2．业余爱好（比如音乐和足球等）
3.5年前开始学习英语
4．将于今年9月进入高中
5．希望今后你们能经常交流，互相有更多的了解，盼望他的回复
常用到的重点短语：
introduce sb to sb 介绍某人
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
like …best 最喜欢…
as…as possible 尽可能的…
【高分句型】
1．I like music and soccer，①which ②help me relax after tiring school days．
①which作为关系词的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子的内容．
②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
2．And I don't think①there will be too much trouble for us to communicate②because I have learned English for five years．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
3．I hope①we can know more about each other and become good friends②as soon as possible．
①hope后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②as…as possible 尽可能的…中间加形容词或副词原形．

解答 Dear David，
On the Internet I got the information that you are looking for a Chinese students as your pen-pal．
First of all，let me introduce myself to you．I was born in April，2001，I am an outgoing boy/girl in a beautiful city in north China．（性别与年龄）This September，I am entering senior high school．（将于今年9月进入高中）I like music and soccer，which help me relax after tiring school days．【高分句型】（业余爱好）As for my subjects，I like English best．And I don't think there will be too much trouble for us to communicate because I have learned English for five years．【高分句型】（5年前开始学习英语）
I hope we can know more about each other and become good friends as soon as possible．【高分句型】
Looking forward to hearing from you．（希望今后你们能经常交流，互相有更多的了解，盼望他的回复）
Yours，
Li Ping

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．