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13．假如你叫李华，是九年级一班的学生．暑假即将来临，学校准备组织部分学生参加暑期公益活动．表格中是学校安排的两项活动及要求，请按照你自己的意愿和特长选择其中一项，然后根据你的选择，给活动负责人刘老师写一封电子邮件，提出申请．
注意：1．词数：80～100；
2．短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校及其他相关信息；
3．邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数．
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Project	What to do	When
Old people's home visit	Cheer them up Tell them some jokes…	Every Tuesday morning
Kids'summer camp	Teach them to read Teach them to look after themselves…	Every Friday afternoon

Dear Mr Liu，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class One，Grade Nine．I read your notice yesterday．I'd like to work as a volunteer for the old people's home．I want to do something for the old people like my loving grandparents．I believe I can do it well，because I'm good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．And I'll be free on every Tuesday morning．I'll try to be a good volunteer．I'll sing and dance with them and we must have a wonderful time together．Besides，I can cook and do the laundry for them．
Please give me the opportunity!It will be a good experience for me．
I'm looking forward to your answer soon．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是按照你自己的意愿和特长选择其中一项愿意参加的活动针对其问题给负责人写一封信，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．你想要选择哪一个项目．
2．为什么？
3．打算怎样做好？
常用到的重点短语：
want to do sth 想要做某事
be good at 擅长
try to do sth 尽力做某事
do the laundry洗衣服
【高分句型】
1．①I'd like to ②work as a volunteer for the old people's home．
①would like to do sth 想要做某事
②work as 担任…职位
2．I believe①I can do it well，②because I'm ③good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．
①省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句
③be good at 擅长，后加名词代词或动名词
3．I'll try to be a good volunteer．
try to do sth 尽力做某事

解答 Dear Mr Liu，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class One，Grade Nine．I read your notice yesterday．I'd like to work as a volunteer for the old people's home．【高分句型】（选择第一个项目）I want to do something for the old people like my loving grandparents．I believe I can do it well，because I'm good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．【高分句型】And I'll be free on every Tuesday morning．（为什么？）
I'll try to be a good volunteer．【高分句型】I'll sing and dance with them and we must have a wonderful time together．Besides，I can cook and do the laundry for them．（打算怎样做好？）
Please give me the opportunity!It will be a good experience for me．（请求）
I'm looking forward to your answer soon．
Best wishes，
Li Hua

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．