Question

15．现在的中学生每月都有一定数量的零花钱．某校对九年级（1）班的30名学生进行了零
花钱用途的调查．结果如下：有的同学常买零食或书籍，有的同学把钱花在手机或其他方面，也有的同学把零花钱存了起来．请你任选图表中的2至3项简述调查结果，谈谈你是如何支配零花钱的，并说明理由．

Nowadays，most middle school students have pocket money every month，and we did a survey in Class 1，Grade 9．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I usually spend most of the money buying good and educational books which I think make me more knowledgeable．
句中"which I think make me more knowledgeable"为定语从句，句中使用短语有：spend+金钱/时间+（in） doing sth 做某事花费…这句话意为：我通常用大部分的钱来买那些我认为能让我更博学的，好的有教育意义的书．
高分句型二：
Whether we can make good use of it is really important，because it can influence the way to grow up．
句中"Whether we can make good use of it"为主语从句，使用短语有"make good use of sth 好好利用…"；"because it can influence the way to grow up"为原因状语从句，使用短语有"the way to do sth  做某事的方式"．这句话意为：我们是否能够好好利用它真的很重要，因为它能影响我们成长的方式．

解答 Nowadays，most middle school students have pocket money every month，and we did a survey in Class 1，Grade 9．（开篇点题）
As the result shows，among the thirty students taking part in the survey，most of them often buy snacks，about a half spend their pocket money on books，and a few save some of it．（调查结果）
However，things on me are quite different．I usually spend most of the money buying good and educational books which I think make me more knowledgeable．【高分句型一】Only a small part is spent on snacks as most of the snacks are in fact unhealthy for us．And I save the rest against a rainy day．（我怎么支配零花钱）
It is true that we have more and more pocket money now．Whether we can make good use of it is really important，because it can influence the way to grow up．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．