Question

【题目】10月28日上午，重庆市万州区一辆大巴车和小轿车发生碰撞，大巴车坠入江中造成多人死亡。事故的原因是由于司机乘客激烈争执互殴导致车辆失控。事发后，坠江事件引发了很多人的思考。请你结合下表，选择其中一个对象，谈谈你认为乘车过程中，司机和乘客究竟该如何做？阐述你的观点。

Advice for drivers	Advice for passengers
drive carefully keep cool call the police if ... . . .	follow the rules be friendly, make requests politely not have a fight with... . . .

注意:(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

(3)词数:80~100；

(4)短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river was caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a _________(driver/ passenger),

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Answer 1

【答案】As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river was caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a driver, you are supposed to keep calm in this condition. Your every decision is concerned with the life of all the passengers. You should drive carefully to ensure the safety of the passengers. If someone becomes mad and loses control of himself, you mustn’t lose yours. You can call the police at once and wait for the policeman to deal with it. Besides, you can also stop the car on the roadside first, and then deal with the disagreement with him. I think if we keep calm and think the safety first, we can prevent similar things from happening.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们对10月28日发生的公交车坠江事件，阐述自己的观点。题目要求学生们从司机和乘客中选择一个对象，谈一谈在乘车过程中，作为司机或乘客应该怎样做。表格中分别列出了写作的提纲。因此写作之前，学生们应首先选择一个对象，或者从司机的角度，或者从乘客的角度进行叙述；然后根据表格中的提示，丰富更多的细节内容，使文章内容丰富、充实，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主、第二人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。另外，英语句子的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句和复合句结构，或使用非谓语动词、被动语态等复杂结构或其他好的句型和短语，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。