Question

【题目】【北京市2015年中考英语试题】文段表达（15分）

根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy

Dear Peter,

How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.

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Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student.

To be a polite middle school student,I think we have to do a lot of things. First, It's important for us to speak politely. We must respect the others. When I meet someone I know ,I often greet him by saying hello to him happliy. We are supposed to be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends.Second, we can't throw rubbish everywhere. We must throw them in the rubbish bins. Littering is not a good habit. Every time I go to the park, I always pick up the litter and put it into the bin. I think if we all do so , the world will be cleaner.Anther important thing is thatwe must follow the rules . There is no doubt that waiting in line is the important rule. I never rush into the bus.Waiting may be a happy thing. I often feel happy when I do something that is better for us. I think being a polite middle school student is proud.

Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：一、话题：做文明中学生二、要点及时态1. 你认为做文明中学生重要的是什么2. 你通常是如何做的3. 你有什么感受时态：一般现在时为主三、行文结构1. 明确提出个人观点2. 针对个人观点阐述自己日常的文明行为3. 结尾表达感受

写作亮点：这篇短文成夹叙夹议，句式丰富，结构清晰，语言流畅。多种句型的应用为文章增色。如：It's important for us…, We are supposed to …, if we all do so, when I do something that…,等。