Question

17．10月24日，星期日，你和同学们一起去郊游．进行的活动有划船、爬山、在山坡上野炊等．你们拍了很多照片．这一天你们玩得很高兴．请根据上述内容写一篇80词左右的日记．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①When we felt tired and hungry，we decided to have a picnic on the hillsides．当我们感到又累又饿的时候，我们决定在山坡上野餐．句子中when引导的是一个时间状语从句，decide to do sth表示决定做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．
②I want to get more chances to go out．我想得到更多出去的机会．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式，后面的to引导的短语作定语修饰changes．

解答 Sunday October 24th（时间和日期）Today I went to the park for a picnic together with my classmates．（引出话题）
We all got up early in the morning and went there by bike．We sang happily while we were riding．（如何去郊游）
In the park，first we went boating on the lake and then we climbed the hill （山）．When we felt tired and hungry，we decided to have a picnic on the hillsides（山坡）．（高分句型）The park was very beautiful．
A lot of flowers were coming out．We also took many photos．（郊游所进行的活动）
We all enjoyed ourselves．I want to get more chances to go out（高分句型）．（我的感受及期望）

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