Question

【题目】写作训练。

请以“How to keep our life safer ”为题，写一篇小作文。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Our Life Safer

Hello, everyone! I’m Jiang, Li from Class One Grade Nine. My topic is about safety. Safety is the first. There is some advice we must remember: First, when you cross the road, we must obey the rules. We mustn’t cross the road when the light is red. We must wait until the light truns green. Second, when we are hungry, we can’t drink too much cold water, or eat things that are unhealthy. Third, when we play games with our classmates, we should be careful not to hurt ourselves or others. Don’t play in the street. Fourth, don’t talk with strangers Don’t follow a stranger to any strange places. That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。要求介绍生活中青少年应该怎样做让自己更加安全。我们要抓住重点‘生活中的自我保护’。主要描述的四点内容比较清晰，我们要做的就是用适当的句式，合适的连词，把它们表达通顺的出来。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如：Third, when we play games with our classmates, we should be careful not to hurt ourselves or others. Don’t play in the street.等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用， 让文章更出彩。