Question

【题目】书面表达

在英语课上，同学们对以下漫画展开了讨论，请根据漫画内容和提示写一篇80-100词的英语短文（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

提示：1）描述漫画内容；

2）分析父母的这种行为对孩子的影响（如感到被忽略，不利于孩子发展等）；

3）你认为对孩子来说什么是最重要的。

首句:Some parents think money is what their children need most.

首句仅供选择使用。

参考词汇：feel left out, influence, development

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

Some parents think money is what their children need most. As we can see in the picture, Xiao Yu’s mother has no time to stay with her son because she is busy making money to provide her son with the best education. However, Xiao Yu’s reply is surprising. He decides to work hard and when he grows up, he will make much money to send her mother to the best old people’s home.

For some parents, money is the only way to show their love. Children often feel left out. It influences their development. In my opinion, the best gift from parents is their love and care. Parents should spend more time with their children even though they are busy. (100 words)

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容要想写好图画式书面表达，同学们应注意以下几点：仔细审题。确定文体、时态及人称。找全要点，兼顾图内图外内容。 准确表达，尽量避免语法或拼写错误。 把要点列出后，要善于把分散的要点用正确、简明、地道的语句进行表达，并按一定的逻辑关系连接。正确用好时态，单词拼写正确，避免汉语式英语等。同时注意调整好要点的出场顺序。仔细检查、修改。

写作亮点：该文语句通顺流畅，段落清晰，准确表达了每一个要点。