Question

3．以My pen pal（我的笔友）为题写一篇60个字左右的小短文
      姓名 Lisa 年龄 13
籍贯 美国 纽约 （New York）
学校 No.3Middle School
外貌 金黄色长卷发，中等身材，有点胖
爱好 喜欢穿蓝色衣服，喜欢读书，下棋，游泳
性格 友好 和善

My pen pal
I have a pen pal．She is Lisa．She comes from the USA．She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York．She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair．But she is a little fat．She wants to be thin．She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue．She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time．He is friendly and kind She is good at her subjects．She likes helping her classmate．Both her classmates and teachers like her very much．She has many frineds．Do you want to be her pen pal？．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time．她喜欢与她的朋友在她的空闲时间里看书，下棋和游泳．句子中like doing sth喜欢做某事，后面跟动词的ing，in her free time在她空闲时间．
②Do you want to be her pen pal？你想成为她的笔友吗，句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．

解答 My pen pal
    I have a pen pal（引出话题）．She is Lisa．She is13．She comes from the USA．She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York．She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair．But she is a little fat．She wants to be thin．She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue．（她的基本信息） She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time（高分句型）．（她的爱好）She is friendly and kind．She is good at her subjects．She likes helping her classmate．Both her classmates and teachers like her very much．（她的性格特点）She has many frineds．Do you want to be her pen pal？（高分句型）（结束语）

点评 本题是一篇提纲提作文，介绍自己的笔友的，学生比较有话说，但是要注意提示要点一定写全．同时还要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．