Question

12．Write a short passage of at least 60words about the topic"To be self-confident!"（以"自信!"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文．标点符号不占格）．
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Situation：
最近，你们班上将要组织一场"To be self-confident!"为题的主题班会，请根据以下提示写一篇短文．
提示供参考：（1）简述你对"自信"的理解．
（2）举例说明你的观点．
（3）适当进行评论．
Boys and Girls，
Life is but a hard and bitter journey．Therefore，I would like to say，"No matter what happens，be self-confident．"【高分句型】
I'd like to share my own experience with you．When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence．I didn't dare to answer teachers'questions in class and was afraid to speak in public．Later，something happened and changed my life．It was a speech contest held at our school．My mother persuaded me to participate，and she had great confidence in me．I chose a topic most appropriate to me-Self-confidence and Success．I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror【高分句型】．With my mother's great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest!
Since then，I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success．So，dear friends，be self-confident and have a brighter future．
Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 重点短语：
1．answer teachers'questions 回答老师的问题
2．win the first prize 获得一等奖
3．the first step towards success迈向成功的第一步
高分句型：
【高分句型一】No matter what happens，be self-confident．无论发生什么，都要自信．（no matter引导让步状语从句，意思是"无论"）
【高分句型二】I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror
我尽最大努力背诵了整篇演讲稿并且在镜子前练习了100多遍．（try one's best to do 尽最大努力做某事）

解答 Boys and Girls，
   Life is a hard and bitter journey．Therefore，I would like to say，"No matter what happens，be self-confident．"【高分句型】
   I'd like to share my own experience with you．When I was 14，I suffered from a lack of confidence．I didn't dare to answer teachers'questions in class and was afraid to speak in public．Later，something happened and changed my life．It was a speech contest held at our school．My mother persuaded me to participate，and she had great confidence in me．I chose a topic most appropriate to me-Self-confidence and Success．I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror【高分句型】．With my mother's great love and encouragement，I won the first prize in the contest!
  Since then，I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success．So，dear friends，be self-confident and have a brighter future．
Thank you!

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，平时多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．