Question

【题目】书面表达

在八年级上学期即将结束之际，八(1)班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈这一学期自己的收获与变化。请为David准备一份80词左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下：

	过去	现在
学习	很少阅读，花时间在……	读书使我放松……
环保	浪费水电，随处乱抛垃圾	意识到环保的重要性，垃圾入桶
礼仪	大声喧哗，插队推挤	举止礼貌，主动让座
爱心	不知道如何关心他人	……
展望未来	相信自己在将来会越来越棒。

Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.

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Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.

First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.

Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.

Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.

Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.

I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一片发言稿，谈谈这一学期自己的收获与变化。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合以下要点：学习，环保，礼仪，爱心，展望未来等四个方面。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。各种短语句型表达的使用非常准确，固定短语“used to do，open up a whole new world to me，realized the importance of protecting the environment，cared little about”以及复合句“Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.”的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。