Question

15．某班英语课上，就"争当中华好少年"进行小组交流活动，请你根据活动记录情况，以
"How to be a good student？"为题，写一篇英语短文．

良好习惯 诚实守信	生活习惯：健康饮食、加强锻炼
	学习习惯：上课认真听讲、按时完成作业 不撒谎、考试不作弊
遵守校规	严禁私自下河洗澡，禁带手机进校园，不打架斗殴
…	…

要求：1．全文字数90词左右．文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数．
2．条理清楚，书写T整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确．
3．内容必须包含表格中的提示信息，并适当发挥；文中不能m现真实的人名、
地名．
How to be a good student？
It's very important to be a good student．As teenagers，how to be a good student？
In my opinion，                            

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
it's necessary to develop good habits in life and study养成好的生活和学习习惯是必要的．
it's+adj+to do sth做某事是怎样的
【高分句型二】
When someone is in trouble，we should give them a hand．当人们有困难，我们应该帮助他．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 How to be a good student？
It's very important to be a good student．As teenagers，how to be a good student？
In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do．Firstly，it's necessary to develop good habits in life and study．【高分句型一】For example，we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day．Besides，we should listen to the teacher carefully and finish homework on time．Secondly，be honest．Don't tell lies and never cheat in tests．Honesty is the best policy．（良好习惯诚实守信）Thirdly，we are supposed to obey the school rules．Don't go swimming alone without permission，and don't take mobile phones to school and so on．（遵守校规）Finally，we should get on well with our classmates．When someone is in trouble，we should give them a hand．【高分句型二】（与同学和睦相处，帮助别人）

点评 要避免不假思索地围绕提纲堆砌材料，写一些"不痛不痒"的句子，或者将中文提纲简单地译成英文，或者将英文提示生硬地搬到作文里．而是在所给材料的基础上，合理巧妙地构思全文，充分表现主题的过程．