Question

【题目】书面表达

根据中文和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。

所给英文提示词仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

你有过独自一人在家的经历吗？请根据你的亲身经历选择情况A或情况B完成短文。

情况A：曾经独自一人在家。你的某次经历及其感受是什么样的？

情况B：未曾独自一人在家。如果有这样的一次机会，你的父母会放心吗？你又会怎样照顾自己呢？

提示词：look after, have fun, miss, grow, worried, excited, surprised

Home alone

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Answer 1

【答案】

A

I’ve been home alone for several times and my first stay at home alone was memorable.

When I was twelve, once both of my parents were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. They left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mom to do it.

I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.

B

Up to now I’ve never had a chance to be at home alone. But if there’s one in the future, I guess I will take care of myself very easily.The reasons are as follows.

First of all, I keep a good daily routine. That’s to say, I can get up and go to bed at usual time by myself. And I can cook simple food. The most important reason is that I can balance my study and entertainment.

Therefore, my parents won’t worry about me if they have to stay away for a few days.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】A这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: For fear of getting up late the next morning,使用到固定短语get up，以及介词+动名词；In order to prove that I could take care of myself,I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mom to do it.I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.为了证明我能照顾好自己，在第二天下午洗了自己的衣服，虽然我可以等这让母亲去做这件事。句中使用到in order to,though引导让步状语从句。以及be proud of以...自豪。

B这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: Up to now；have a chance to do sth.But if there’s one in the future, I guess I will take care of myself very easily.条件状语从句。Therefore因此。The most important reason is that I can balance my study and entertainment. 表语从句。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.