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【题目】为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“如何提升自我保护能力”的讨论。请以“How to protect ourselves”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容必须包括以下要点：1）尊敬师长，与同学好相处；
2）公共场所，举止文明，不追逐打闹；
3）不乱交网友，不泄露个人信息；
4）……（自助发挥，至少两点）
注意事项：1）词数90左右，标题与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to protect ourselves
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

How to protect ourselves

Protecting ourselves is becoming more and more important. To ensure our safety, we need to know how to protect ourselves.

First of all, we must respect our teachers and parents. We should get on well with our classmates as well. We also need to behave well in public and don't make any noise. What's more, in our daily life, it's very important for us to keep our own information safe. We must choose right e-friends when we chat on the Internet. Last but not least, when we get out, we must obey the traffic rules. And we must improve the awareness of protecting ourselves.

Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!

【解析】这是一篇给材料的提纲作文，本文只给出了主要写作要点。根据提示，写作中要注意从“与人相处、公共场所的举止、交网友”等方面进行阐述，并自己补充一到两点。短文用第一人称，一般现在时态。本范文第一段先提出观点：保护我们自己变得越来越重要，然后用一个句子过渡：我们需要知道怎样保护自己，引出下文。语言简捷。所用的动名词作主语及不定式作目的状语，准确恰当。第二段详细阐述如何保护自己，本段用first of all, what's more, last but not least等等引出各要点，层次清楚，条理分明。We must, we should, we also need等等不同句式的使用，使本文生动具体；不定式作主语，带有时间状语从句的复合句等等的使用，也为本文增色添彩。最后一段点明中心，突出主题：危险离我们绝不遥远，一直要照顾好我们自己。