Question

7．假如你是李华，你们学校正就"感恩父母，从我做起"这一话题开展大讨论．请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈为什么要感恩父母，你通常在业余时间帮父母做什么，以及你这样做的感受．
提示词语：think，bring up，work，make money，support，housework，cook，clean，wash，happy，proud
提示问题：●Why is it important for you to thank parents？
●What do you usually do for them in your spare time？
●How do you feel？
At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：My classmates and I think we should do something for them，because they bring us up我和我的同学认为我们应该为他们做点什么．因为他们把我们养大．这是一个由because引导的原因状语从句．bring up养大成人．
高分句型二：My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed我的父母为我感到骄傲，因为我可以让他们感到轻松．be proud of sb．为…感到骄傲，自豪，这是一个由because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．My classmates and I think we should do something for them，because they bring us up（高分句型一）．They not only work hard to make money but also look after us carefully（为什么要感恩父母）．
     To thank my parents，I always take some actions．First of all，I usually help my parents do some housework in my spare time．For example：help them clean the floor，wash the dishes on weekends and help them cook breakfast and so on．（我们的具体做法）
     My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed（高分句型二）．I feel very happy too．（作者的感受）．

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．