Question

【题目】写作
临近毕业，学校要求每个初三学生写封信给各个家长，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在问题。假如你是Jim，请根据下表的内容提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报。

收 获	1）学到很多知识，提高了学习技能。 2）了解到许多名人及他们的事迹。（举1-2个例子，参考人名：Spud， Tan Dun， Armstrong， Marie Curie， Audrey Hepburn...） 3）学会做人：在校与老师同学和睦相处，互相帮助；在家......；在上学途中，遵守交通规则，能......；遇到困难时，能......
存在问题	学习压力（feel stressed in...）大，......（再举1-2个例子）
目前想法	1）感谢…… 2）打算（怎样处理存在的问题）

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have done in the past three years.
……
Yours Sincerely
Jim

Answer 1

【答案】I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like tell you what I have learnt in the past three years.
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt a lot of famous people all over the world. Spud's story tells us not to give up when we do anything. Tan Dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other， too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. On my way to school， I can obey the traffic rules./I can help old men cross the road. When I meet difficulty， I can talk to my friends/teachers/you about it.
Now I feel stressed in my study. I can't get enough sleep/I have too much homework to do every day/I have no time for my hobbies.
I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well/ make my study and my body better.
Yours Sincerely
Jim
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是现在完成时态，一般现在时态和将来时，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题及注意事项。特别要注意主句是过去时从句用一般现在时，表示一种事实或真理在文中运用。注意跟进材料内容适当发挥。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态和将来时态，人称为单数第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。