Question

【题目】书面表达

最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点

	Dreams	Reasons	Actions
Millie	Volunteer	1.be a volunteer doctor in the Red Cross 2.save people’ s lives	1. go to a good medical college; 2.try to learn different kinds of skills .
Simon	Teacher	1.teach the students knowledge 2.help them grow up healthily	1.work hard. 2. read more books;
I	….	…	…

要求：

1. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息（Millie, Simon两位同学畅谈了自己的梦想），并适当发挥；，2. 你谈到了自己的梦想，以及如何实现自己的梦想。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名，

4.词数：90词左右（文章开头已写好，不计入总字数）

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Encouraged by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

Millie has wanted

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Answer 1

【答案】

Millie has wanted to be a volunteer doctor . She wants to work for the Red Cross. She thinks doctors are doing a meaningful job. They not only save people’s lives but also encourage their patients to fight with illnesses. She said she must learn as much as she can so that she can get into a good medical college and learn different kinds of skills.

Simon also talked about his own dream, He wants to be a teacher when he grows up. He will teach the children in the poor areas. In order to be a teacher he will work hard from now on and read more books.

I want to be a writer. I can write many books to introduce our culture and let more people learn about the beauty of our country. Besides, the recorded culture will also pass down form generation to generation. In order to achieve my dream, I need to read more books and practice my writing.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们按照所给的信息写一篇关于“我的中国梦”的文章，文章既要包含Millie和Simon两个同学的梦想，他们的内容已经在题目中体现在出来，要用合适的语言将它们正确的表达出来；另外，还要写出自己的梦想，并且要写出如何实现自己的梦想。

写作亮点： 这篇作文要点齐全，表达通畅流利，是一篇非常优秀的作文。题目中的信息点不是简单的堆砌，而是通过一些句型有机的组织在一起。文中使用了很多非常有用的表达方式，例如not only…but also…不仅，而且； so that 为了；from now on从今以后；pass down form generation to generation.一代代相传；文中也用了一些连词如Besides，In order to等，使文章更加流畅。