Question

假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：

1.邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟; 2.你请他们不要那样做; 3.他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

4.你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是泰州的未来，应该……（至少两点） 参考词汇：公共道德 public morality

要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节使句子通顺、连贯。

2. 词数：80~100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened. A group of young people sitting next to us talked loudly and smoked. It made the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.

What the young people did was wrong. Although I failed to stop them, I was proud of myself. In my opinion, one should keep quiet in public places. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Taizhou.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容准确描述事情并且表达自己的个人观点。在描述事情时应采用正确的时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了instead, although, in my opinion, what’s more,but等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:enjoy ourselves, full of, try to do, refuse to do, laugh at, fail to do, be proud of, pay attention to等。

考点：提纲作文。