Question

8．根据内容提示和要求，以"My Dream Job"为题写一篇短文．
内容提示：1．想成为一名记者；
 2．多读书，勤写作，向报刊、杂志投稿…；
 3．高中毕业后去北京上大学；
 4．想到电视台工作，游祖国大好河山，观世界风云变幻；
 5．通过努力，梦想成真．
要求：1．条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
 2．可根据提示适当增加内容；
 3．不少于80词．
MyDreamJob
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior（high）school．Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist（reporter）．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．我喜欢和人交谈，问他们问题，所以我长大后想当一名记者．
本句是用连词so连接的一个并列句，意为"因此，所以"，表结果；like doing sth固定用法，喜欢做某事；when在后一句中引导时间状语从句，当…的时候
高分句型二：
I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．我想如果我努力，总有一天我会实现我的梦想．
I think 后跟了宾语从句作think的宾语，省略了引导词that．
if引导的条件状语从句，时态遵循主将从现的原则．

解答 My Dream Job
I like talking to people and asking them questions，so I want to be a journalist（reporter） when I grow up．【高分句型一】【点题，想成为一名记者】The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．【多读书，勤写作，向报刊、杂志投稿】I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior（high）school．【高中毕业后去北京上大学】Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist（reporter）．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．【想到电视台工作，游祖国大好河山，观世界风云变幻；】I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．【高分句型二】【总结全文，通过努力，梦想成真】

点评 本篇是一篇提纲作文，写作时，切记逐句翻译，写作前，首先要理清思路，然后选用合适的词或短语，让文意更通顺，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．