Question

2．家长们认为孩子们应该多花时间在学习上．好的成绩才有选择好学校、好工作的权利．但是孩子们有自己
的想法，请根据提示完成短文．

Parents'opinion	多花时间在学习上 好的成绩才有权利选择好学校，好工作
Children's opinion	不是唯一重要的 学习照顾自己 应对今后的生活 参加一些活动 懂得与人交流
Your opinion

主要：
I．包含所给提示．并增加自己的观点．
2．词敬不少于80．开头已写好，不计人总词数．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
Recently，parents pay more attention to children's study．                           ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
They think they should take part in more activities．他们认为他们应该参加更多的活动．
这是一个宾语从句省略that
take part in 参加
句型二：
In my opinion，we can have a talk with our parents．在我看来，我们可以跟我们的父母谈谈．
in one's opinion在某人看来
 have a talk with sb与某人交谈

解答 答案：Recently，parents pay more attention to children's study．Some parents think kids should spend more time on study．Good grades result to have the right to choose a good school，a good job．（父母的观点）But many children don't think so．They think that learning is not the only thing that matters．（学习不是唯一重要的）They should also learn how to take good care of themselves．（学习照顾自己）For the life in the future．They think they should  take part in more activities．【高分句型一】（多参加活动）This helps to communicate with others（与人交流）．From this they also can learn to solve difficulties in life．In my opinion，we can have a talk with our parents．【高分句型二】We need to all-round development．It's good for us to  take part in more activities or do some sports．（学生的观点）

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