Question

【题目】B某杂志社举办“我愉快的夏令营”征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加这次活动。短文内容如下：去年夏天，你和父母去了海边，玩沙子、游泳，中午吃海鲜；下午放风筝；晚上回去，很累，但很高兴。

要求：词数：60词左右。可以适当发挥，不能按原文翻译。

有可能用到的词：海滨：seaside 玩沙子：play with sand 海鲜：seafood 友好：friendly 有益的：helpful：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My happy summer camp

Last summer my parents and I went to the seaside. We played with sand on the beach, and we swam in the sea. How happily we play! At noon we had seafood for lunch. It is delicious. In the afternoon we flew kites. In the evening we went back. We were tired but happy. The people in the camp were friendly. I think the summer camp is helpful to us and we should go on a summer camp.

【解析】去年夏天，我和父母去了海边the seaside，玩沙子played with sand、游泳，中午吃海鲜seafood for lunch；下午放风筝flew kites；晚上回去，很累，但很高兴be tired but happy。

注意句子的完整性，时态的正确使用，句子之间的衔接和踩点。