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【题目】书面表达

你校英文报组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语，，征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句英语谚语中任选一句，写一篇90词左右的短文，参加征文活动。

Many hands make light work.

Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.

Practice makes perfect.

Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it.

短文内容须包括： (1）你喜欢的谚语及其含义 (2）体现该谚语含义的个人经历 注意：1．短文中已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。 2．短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

Answer 1

【答案】My favourtite English saying

My English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.

Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.

The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!

【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇英语短文，参加学校英文报组织的“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动。题目中给出了两条谚语，我们可以从中选择一条，介绍一些它的含义，并描述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历，这才是文章的主体部分。通过审题可知，文章应主要包括两个内容：首先选择自己最喜欢的谚语，介绍它的含义；然后叙述一件自己经历过的、能体现该谚语含义的故事。写作时，可以根据这两个内容分为两段。短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，介绍自己的经历时，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其注意不规则动词过去式的变化。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。而应从句子整体结构考虑，以英语中的简单句结构为基础，使用恰当的词汇和句型。为提升文章档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and、but等连接的并列句，以及宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。语句之间、段落之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。