Question

【题目】【2016江苏徐州】书面表达

王平现在美国上学。今天他将外出一天。请你以王平的名义给房东Mrs Black 写一张留言条， 要点如下：

计划	内容
上午去图书馆	（1）还书 （2）……
下午跟朋友去公园	（1）……(2) 回来路上顺便帮Mrs Black买…
晚上六点前回家	晚饭想吃…….
另：Mrs Black的女儿Helen 一大早来电话，说……,请尽快回电

注意： 1. 词数90 左右。 留言条已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。

2. 不要逐字翻译。 可适当增加细节， 使行文连贯。

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mrs Black,

I am having a day out today. In the morning I will go to the library to return the books.Then I will look for some information for my report. In the afternoon I will go to the park with my friends. We plan to go boating and climb the hill there. On my way back I’ll buy some milk as you said yesterday we don’t have any at home. I’ll be back home by six p.m. Would you please cook some fish for me? I love fish very much.

Early this morning, your daughter Helen called, saying that she had something important to talk to you. Please call her back as soon as possible.

Wang Ping

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍王平给房东Mrs Black 写一张留言条，介绍自己的计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I will go to ...；We plan to ...；I’ll be ...；your daughter Helen called, saying that ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要外出一天，接下来介绍我的计划：去图书馆，去公园，回家；最后让Mrs Black给她的女儿Helen会电话。此处look for,plan to,go boating, on one’s way back, would you please...?talk to sb, as soon as possible等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。