Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你有一位同学叫Jack,他在生活和学习方面与过去有很大的不同。请根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下他的进步。

过去	现在
起床晚,经常上课迟到	早早起床读英语,按时到校
上课说话,不听课	认真听讲,记笔记
晚上不学习,玩游戏	晚上在家认真学习,有问题向父母寻求帮助
……	……

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

Answer 1

【答案】I have a classmate.His name is Jack.He used to be a problem student.But now he is one of the best students in our class.In the past years,he used to get up late and was always late for school.But now he gets up early and reads English every morning.He gets to school on time every day.In class,he used to talk with others in class.He didn’t use to listen to the teachers.But now he is very careful in class and takes a lot of notes.In the evening,he used to play computer games or watch TV at home.But now he studies and does his homework carefully.When he has problems,he asks his parents for help.What’s more,he used to fight with other students,but now he usually helps students who are in trouble and gets on well with his classmates.

【解析】

写作思路：本文可以分为三个部分，首先开头点明主题，说明变化的发生；接下来陈述变化的具体细节，在此环节可以今夕对比进行，注意句子的时态运用要正确；最后针对变化进行总结。本篇文章首先I have a classmate. His name is Jack. He used to be a problem student. But now he is one of the best students in our class.点明本篇文章的主题，说明Jack现在有了很大的变化；然后利用He used to…but now…句型陈述具体的变化，按照文章要求逐一说明，层次分明，思路清晰，其中还用到What’s more 使得文章具有连贯性。