Question

【题目】在竟争激烈的当今社会, 作为一名中学生, 承受着来自生活和学习等多方面的压力。请你以 How to Reduce the Pressure为题, 谈一谈你是怎样减缓压力的。

要求： 1.词数： 80词左右。

2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。

3.文章内容可适当发挥。

How to Reduce the Pressure

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Reduce the Pressure

Nowadays, we are under too much pressure. It's not good for our development.

In order to reduce the pressure, I often do some sports, such as running, swimming and playing basketball. I also hang out with my friends when I fee1 stressed. Listening to music is a good way for me to relax, especially light music and pop songs. It's very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents. They can understand me better

These ways of relaxation help me a lot. Now I am more confident and do better than before.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求谈一谈怎样减缓生活和学习等方面的压力。短文可以从社会现状、减压的重要性、如何积极地减压等方面进行写作。要做到语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。短文用第一人称，用一般现在时态，可以多用一些带有情态动词的句子来帮助表达。

写作亮点：短文层次清楚，条理清晰。短文第一段摆明现象：压力大，说明影响：不利于我们成长，语言简捷精炼；第二段具体讲述如何减压，突出短文中心和重点；其中的动名词短语用得很准确，不定式作主语结构运用恰当；第三段简短结尾：这些放松的方式帮助我很大，现在我更自信了，比以前做得更好了。再次表明作者观点：压力太大不好，减压有益健康成长。揭示中心，突出主题。