Question

【题目】书面表达

初中生活即将结束。在这三年里你的生活中定不乏难以忘怀的人或事，请以“An unforgettable in my school life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。讲述

一个你最难忘的人或事。

要求: 1.请补全题目，如teacher. classmate或trip等:

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校姓名;

3.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life

For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.

【解析】

本篇是话题作文，介绍自己难忘的人或事。

1.本篇要求学生自己补全题目，确定写作的目标，写自己3年初中校园生活里难忘的人或事，描述难忘的人用第三人称，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时，开头和结尾一般性阐述，用一般现在时；书写时要围绕中心“unforgettable”，叙述清楚具体的事件或情节，文章结构要清晰明了，注意短语、句型的正确使用。

2.本篇例文叙述难忘的英语老师，开头句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主题，正文部分详细描述了老师如何耐心的多方面的帮助自己，结尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.呼应中心词unforgettable。整篇文章结构严谨，紧扣主题，前呼后应。

3.高分亮点：巧用连词， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有机结合；短语how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也为文章的语言增色不少。