题目内容

38、书面表达

就学生该不该带手机的问题有许多不同的看法。现在许多学生用手机,他们认为使用手机是一种时尚;另外用手机和家人、朋友联系方便;但是一些学生违反学校规则把手机带到班里,在班里就能听到手机铃声。一些学生甚至在班里发短信。最后请谈谈你的看法。根据上面的汉语提示写一篇120词左右的短文。

【解析】

本文属于给出汉语提示的半开放性的写作。成文时应注意以下几点:

1.      内容表达要条理要清晰。正反对比分明;

2.      内容要点要齐全;

3.      注意人称和时态。时态用一般现在时,人称用一、三人称;

4.      注意使用关联词,使文章顺畅、自然。

适当使用一些高级词汇和句式。

 

 

试题答案

38、【参考范文】

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high student. Now many students use mobile phones .They think it’s a fashion to use mobile phones .Besides, it’s very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. But some students break the rules in class. They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.

In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge .Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons .Those with mobile phones shouldn’t take mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.

                                                    Yours sincerely

                                                   Wang Li

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       假设你是李伟.最近,你的加拿大笔友Mike写信问你对中学生带手机上学有何看法,刚好你班同学就此进行过讨论.请根据下列信息给他写一封信,客观介绍你班讨论的情况并提出你自己的意见.
 
70%的学生认为 30%的学生认为
1、没有必要带手机. 1、学生带手机可以与家长保持联系.
2、上课开机会影响自己和别人的学习. 2、学生可以带手机上学,但上课要关机.
3、学生用手机会增加家长经济负担. 3、决不可将手机用于不该用的地方.

注意: 1、信的开头已为你写好.
          2、词数:120左右.
          3、参考词语:手机cellphone或mobile phone.
Dear Mike,
     Thanks for writing. It so happened that we just had such a discussion and I was
on one side of the two groups.                                                              
                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                      
                                                                           
                                                                                      
     Best wishes,
                                                                                           Yours,
                                                                                            Li  Wei
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第二节  书面表达(满分25分)

假设你是李伟。最近,你的加拿大笔友Mike写信问你对中学生带手机上学有何看法,刚好你班同学就此进行过讨论。请根据下列信息给他写一封信,客观介绍你班讨论的情况并提出你自己的意见。

70%的学生认为

30%的学生认为

1、没有必要带手机。

2、上课开机会影响自己和别人的学习。

3、学生用手机会增加家长经济负担。

1、学生带手机可以与家长保持联系。

2、学生可以带手机上学,但上课要关机。

3、决不可将手机用于不该用的地方。

注意:1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数:120左右。3、参考词语:手机cellphone或mobile phone.

Dear Mike,

    Thanks for writing. It so happened that we just had such a discussion and I was on one side of the two groups.                                                             

                                                                              

                                                                                     

Best wishes,

                                                                   Yours,

                                                                   Li  Wei

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