假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I went to the English Camp in Shanghai on last summer holiday.
One day, my two good friends and I were on duties.When we finished cleaning
classroom, it was about 8:50 in the evening.
Then we prepared to go to students’ dorm. Inside
the building, it was very dark. There was only the moon
and some small stars in the sky. In that moment, we were both afraid. On our
way to the dorm, one of my friends saw something on the ground and picked
it up, said “Look, 50 yuan!” When we got to our dorm,
we gave them to the
teacher. Money is important, but money is not anything and cannot buy all what we need in the
world.
抚顺一中2009届高三第一次月考