1. give you our thankful words宜改为express our thanks，这样更正式些。

3. 深信些次短暂访问一定会丰富多彩。愿和美国学生交流学习经验，特别是如何学好英语方面，请美国朋友提出宝贵建议。

　　　 注意：不要逐字翻译提示；词数100左右。

学生作文一

Dear everyone,

　　　 I’m very glad to have the honour to be on behalf of our student touring group to give you our thankful words¹.

　　　 First of all, thank you for inviting us to visit your school and for your warm welcome meeting. As it is known to all, your school is a famous school at home or abroad². And we are all more than fortunate to have a chance to visit it. As a result³, we strongly believe that this visit will be wonderful and successful.

　　　 Finally, we are very willing to exchange the experience of studying with you. Especially, if you give us some advice on how to learn English, we will feel pleased. Hope that we will have a good time dring⁴ this visit. That’s all, thank you. (131 words)

教师批改

2. 该校是美国的一所名校，今天有机会到此访问深感荣幸。

1. 对主人热情邀请你们访问并举行隆重欢迎会表示衷心感谢。

　你今年22岁,是滨海大学英语系应届毕业生,英语听、说、读、写、译水平很高,而且能说日语,业余时间当过打字员,寒暑假期间当过导游.你的邮箱是滨海P.O. Box 64.

　词数:120左右。

　词数:120 左右。

3.C 开头也有having a party at home通常给人带来的辛苦：usually requires a lot of running…两下形成对照。hassle即为通常人们在举办party时会遇上的情况，也就是a situation causing difficulty or trouble。

2.A Their goal is to help parents and children share in the fun part of party planning,…；share在此意为to have (fun) together。因此本项party planning服务的最重要意义在于bring parents and children closer together。

1.D 本题考查考生对作者写作意图的理解与判断能力。具体为对所读材料体裁的把握。短文中有多处线索可以提示，尤其在结尾段里：The standard $ 200 package(可谓“套餐”)for… includes… For more information, call… at…既有服务内容，又有价格、联系电话，这样的口吻显然是在sell a service

(选项D)。

3. What does the underlined word “hassle” (paragraph 1) probably mean?

　A. a party designed by specialists

　B. a plan requiring careful thought

　C. a situation causing difficulty of trouble

　D. a demand made by guests