摘要:尝试改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地都是主语开头.接着是谓语.宾语.最后再加一个状语.要灵活运用诸如倒装句.强调句.主从复合句.分词短语等.这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美. (1) We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 修改意见: Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. (2) We had to stand there to catch the offender. 修改意见 :What we had to do was stand there to catch the offender. (3)Our brave Ah Fu had saved my little sister. 修改意见: It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

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假设你的朋友Linda ,现在正感到生活不快乐,不健康,有压力,可又不知道如何改变自己的生活方式,于是写信给你,请求你提些建议。

    下面是你提的几点建议,请按照以下内容给Linda回一封信(约100词左右)

     1.要有足够的睡眠,至少8小时,这样才能精力充沛(energetic)、学习积极(active)。

     2.多锻炼是非常重要的。

     3.多吃水果和蔬菜,禁止吃垃圾食品(junk food)。

     4.学习之余听听音乐可以减轻压力。

     5.尽可能地微笑,它会帮助你快乐、忘记烦恼。

Dear Linda :

    If you  want to be healthy and happy,you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I have some advice for you and I hope you will follow all of it.                                                                                              

                                                                                               

                                                                                              

 

                                                                                              

                                                                                               

                                                                                              

                                                                                               

                                                                                              

                                                                                              

                                                                                               

                                                                                              

Yours,

Li Hua

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