短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中做多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加： 在缺词出加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均为仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Abby,

       How are you? Today I’ve got wonderful news to tell you. I’ve offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundreds and twenty students took exams but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely. They couldn’t imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead of. Then I’ll be able to continue living with us. Why can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

      Best Wishes!

                                                                                                      Jane

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分)

    英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

  增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

  删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

             2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

             3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

  Dear classmates，

    I’ll tell you everything about my future．Every one of US is thinking about the future．Do you know what that mine is? I have decided to become the middle school teacher．Does it sound surprising? I have this dream when I was only a child．I love children．

       As we all can see，teachers are great needed in our country，especially in the country side．Many parents want his children to be well—educated，and they don’t want them to be teachers．Perhaps one of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little．In spite that，I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown．

1. This disappearance made it possible the rise of mammals on the earth.

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2. They mustn’t be at home, for the light is off.

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3. The reason for which he was absent yesterday was because his mother was ill in hospital.

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4. It wasn’t until I told them the truth which they began to understand what they had done.

       项应改为              

5. China is no longer what it used to, of which we Chinese are proud.

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6. The secret of his success lies in the full use he has made his time and energy in his study and work.

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7. What Tom said just now suggested that he shouldn’t agree to the plan.

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8. Which is known to us all, the earth moves around the sun.

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9. The day he had been looking forward to coming in time, which made him very happy.

       项应改为             

10. It is reported that two schools, both of them are being built in my hometown, will open next 

year.

       项应改为             

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧  ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
I am a senior high school student. In my opinion, the classroom is place for students to gain knowledges. So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom. But recently some students have brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones. To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on their studies, I suggest that mobile phones shouldn’t be used in the classroom. At least, they should be used where we are having a class.