摘要:1.外出购物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋见面取消2)此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意:2.可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯. [范文] Mrs Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua [解析] 作文题属于提纲式要点作文.要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条.是学生比较熟悉的题材.体现了英语学习应该注意实用性.生活型的原则.应注意下面几点:1)注意人称.应该用第一人称的形式给房东注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时,而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换.会用到一般过去时.现在时和将来时.3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语.是各个要点间逻辑连贯.行文通顺.提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译.而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句.因此要仔细组织语言.合理安排结构.在语言方面.要特别注意简洁明了.开头要开门见山. [简评]依然保持全国卷I短文写作的老套路:人物李华(自1999年以来.中间除了02年.统统都是李华同学在写信.历时十年.众多效尤者).话题为简单的外语外事活动.形式为写信.实则依然是短文写作.控制程度较高.体裁以陈述说明为主.

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