增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

(2)只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from an art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children not until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only difference between the life of these children — the love, made a great difference to us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I'd like to shares my personal experience in improving our English writing skills. The ability to write in English is becoming increasing important in English communication as well as in examinations. Thus, it was worth focusing our attention on.

In order to write a good essay, we should have a excellent command of over 2,000 frequently-used English word. It's necessary and useful for them to read or even recite beautiful English articles. Beside, as the saying goes, that practice makes perfect, so we should take every possible chance to write in English. According my personal experience, keep a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim

增加：在缺词处加一个字符号（Λ）,并住其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

One day，I asked Jenny, one of my friend, whether she would like to study English with me. "Your idea sounded very good because we can all improve our English, "Jenny said. 'Therefore, I won't do that before you make progress in the come examination next week. 'Then she asked if I was willing to meet challenge. Hearing her words I answered what I would. I used the Internet, films, books, or everything else to improve my English skills. Much to my happiness made it a week late and Jenny agreed with to study together with me.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Black,

I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Life is full of various experiences,some of them are unforgettable.I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year later.That summer day,we set off early in the morning,think it would be great fun to walk for so long a distance.However,with the weather is getting hotter and hotter,I found their legs heavier and heavier.What’s worse,my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes.At one point,I even wanted to give up.But I manage to drag the rest of the way to the destination.

Though not pleasant,this journey was impressive or rewarding.I have learnt that life is a long journey like this. No matter what happened,we should never give up.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I’d like to offer you any advice.

Firstly, it’s normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you’re friendly to the others.

I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

A Chinese boy is reported to have spent about 2 million yuan in studying in New Zealand but failed to get any diploma. He even could not take care of himself and his grandmother had to feed him.

The man in the case is a so-called adult baby, because his deeds make him almost the same as a baby. He cannot take care of himself. He is unable to go to school, let alone finish studies.He even relies on his grandmother to feed him.

However, he burns money faster than any normal student. He spent about 2 million yuan in two years overseas, but could not finish even the preparatory courses. We do not mean to judge his choice，but someone who lacks the basic ability to survive has little chance of success in any modern society.

In a later interview, the mother of the boy was in tears and said she regretted not having taught her son well.She also told the story about how she “educated” her son: meeting all his demands, even the unreasonable ones.When he did not perform well in school, she simply spent money in sending him overseas; she would buy whatever he wanted.That was bad for her and bad for him.

（写作内容）

1. 以约30个单词概括文章大意；

2. 谈谈你如何看待”巨婴”现象，然后用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整、语言规范、语篇连贯、词数适当。

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● 具体描述两幅图；

● 简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；

● 提出解决问题的建议。

（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）

【1】The building _______________ the disabled people as it has no steps.

【2】That accident was frightening, but nobody knows how it ___________.

【3】Commercial advertisement is one of the things that were difficult ____________ when watching TV.

【4】He _______________poems and hoped to be a poet one day.

【5】__________the accounts, he found the enough evidence of the bribery.

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last month, I gave some of my clothes to a girl who needed it because her parents didn't have money to buy her newly clothes. In school, this girl was the victim of bullying because of the clothes that she wears.S0 1 went home and was told mom that I'd like collect something for her. Knew what she suffered in the school broke my heart. Sometimes young people are so mean to others which don't have the money to buy some expensive thing. This has to change because it is not clothes or shoes that makes a person. It is what we have in our heart but our soul that matters.