【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, as the development of the Internet, there comes a kind of language calling Web Language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English words. This is a phenomenon which is very worth think about, Some people think it is a kind of ridiculous. In their opinion, it make no sense in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, others, specially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. In my opinion, it’s not good to use this kind of language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also get your ideas confused, leaving the other people at a loss to your meaning.

【题目】During the Spring and Autumn Period, the State of Wu launched an attack against the State of Yue. The king of Wu was seriously wounded and soon died.__ 【1】___(he) son Fu Chai became the new king. Fu was determined to revenge. He trained his army_____【2】___(strict) until it was a perfect fighting force. Three years later, he led his army ____【3】____the State of Yue and caught its king Gou Jian.

In order to avenge his father’s____【4】___ (die), Fu let him live in a shabby stone house by his father’s tomb and ordered him to raise horses for him. Gou pretended to be loyal to Fu,__ 【5】_____ he never forgot his humiliation(羞辱).Many years later , he ____【6】___(set) free. Gou secretly accumulated a military force after he went back to his own state. In order to make himself tougher he slept on firewood and ate a gall-bladder(苦胆) before having dinner and going to bed every night. At ___【7】___ same time he administered his state carefully，___【8】____(develop) agriculture. After a few years, his country became strong. Then Gou seized a favorable opportunity to wipe off the State of Wu.

Later, people use it 【9】 (describe) one who stands self-imposed（自愿接受）hardships to ___【10】____(strong) one’s determination to realize one’s ambition.

【题目】My sons and I decided to go walking around the lake near our home the other day. It is such a place to spend an afternoon in the springtime when flowers are on the trees and grass is coming up through the ground. It has a well path that circles the entire lake. You can walk at your own and delight in all the natural beauty that surrounds you. It is the perfect place to get back to nature and to fill your soul with joy.

The only is that with the path being so near the water, erosion(侵蚀) sometimes creates holes. It was while we were to walk along it the other day that one of them caught my oldest boy . He stumbled and almost fell but thankfully was able to reach out and take my hand. I him and we walked on for a while holding hands and feeling in our love for each other.

I think that sometimes the we face in our long life are a lot like those holes in the ground. They are always there causing us to stumble and sometimes even to fall. It is good to know, , that we can always reach out and take the hands of our beloved ones. They are always there by our side to pick us up and steady us. They are always for us to take their hands and walk on with them connected in love without .

The next time you stumble and fall on your through life then reach out and take loving hands. And you take them never let them go again. Walk on with them forever, choosing love and sharing joy with each you take. Always remember too that with the loving hands your walk you can use your other hands to reach out and help those who have fallen as well. The life journey, , is always better when you are holding the hands of those you love.

【1】A. commonB. secretC. remoteD. glorious

【2】A. coming outB. picking outC. showing offD. running off

【3】A. decoratedB. wornC. pavedD. repaired

【4】A. paceB. expenseC. requestD. service

【5】A. forgetB. recognizeC. touchD. protect

【6】A. excitementB. differenceC. problemD. memory

【7】A. warm-heartedB. light-heartedC. absent-mindedD. narrow-minded

【8】A. unwillinglyB. ultimatelyC. occasionallyD. unexpectedly

【9】A. blamedB. encourageC. steadiedD. accompanied

【10】A. connectedB. ignoredC. blockedD. surprised

【11】A. chancesB. troublesC. changesD. responsibilities

【12】A. thereforeB. howeverC. besidesD. otherwise

【13】A. waitingB. learningC. forgettingD. hoping

【14】A. freeB. availableC. convenientD. ready

【15】A. purposeB. effortC. difficultyD. hesitation

【16】A. directionB. destinationC. journeyD. experience

【17】A. afterB. beforeC. unlessD. because

【18】A. adviceB. stepC. choiceD. measure

【19】A. draggingB. leadingC. guidingD. balancing

【20】A. above allB. first of allC. after allD. in all

【题目】最近一段时间我国多个地方出现雾霾天气，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。因此你想以此为话题，写一篇通讯稿。应包括以下要点：

1. 对生活造成的影响； 2. 建议采取的措施

要求：1. 词数 100 - 120； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：雾霾haze 雾霾天气hazy weather

Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China._______________

【题目】中国人出国旅游的不文明行为越来越受到广泛关注。请以表格中所列举的事实为依据，写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

注意：

1. 文章必须包括表格中的提示内容，可以增加细节使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

4. 参考词汇：乱丢 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；声誉 reputation

As more and more Chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in.

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【题目】—It______________to plant trees and grass on the hillside.

—Yes. They help stop soil from being washed away.

A. makes sense B. makes money

C. makes a living D. makes a mistakes

【题目】 Great changes________ in the city, and a lot of factories________.

A．have been taken place; have been set up

B．have taken place; have been set up

C．have taken place; have set up

D．were taken place; were set up

【题目】阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。

There was once a beautiful girl who hated herself because she was blind. She also hated everyone else, except her _【1】__ (love) boyfriend who was considerate and was always there to help her. One day she told her boyfriend, “You _【2】 (be) so kind to me and if I could only see the world, I should marry you.”

One day, someone donated a pair of eyes to her. Doctors spent several hours doing __【3】__ (operate) for her and the boy accompanied her at the bedside all the time. When the bandages came off, she was able to see everything, her boyfriend _【4】__ (include), of course.

He asked her, “now _【5】__ you can see the world, will you marry me？” The girl looked at her boyfriend and saw that he was blind, too.

The sight of __【6】_ ugly closed eyelids shocked her and made her feel sick. She had not expected that, and __【7】__ thought of looking at them in the rest of her life led her to refuse to marry him.

Her boyfriend left _【8】__ tears and a few days later sent a note to her， __【9】_ said，“Please take good care of your eyes, my dear, because before they are yours, they were _【10】__！”

After reading the words, the girl burst out crying, regretting what she had done to the boy.

【题目】It’s great fun to explore new places—it feels like an adventure，even when you know you’re not the first to have been there. But make sure not to get lost or waste time going round in circles.

● Do the map reading if you’re being driven somewhere. It’ll be easier if you keep turning the map so it follows the direction you’re traveling in. Keep looking ahead so that you can give the driver lots of warning before having to make a turn or you’ll have to move to the back seat.

● Get a group of friends together and go exploring. You'll need a good map, a compass , a raincoat, a cell phone to call for help in case you get lost, and a bit of spare cash for emergencies . Tell someone where you’re going before you set out and let them know what time you expect to be back. The test is in not getting lost, not in seeing how fast you can go, so always stick together, waiting for slower friends to catch up.

● See if your school or a club organizes orienteering activities, in which you need a map and a compass to find your way. This can be done as a sport, with teams trying to find the way from A to B (and B to C, etc.)in the fastest time, or simply as a spare-time activity. Either way, its not only good fun, but a great way to keep fit.

【1】 Sitting beside the driver, you should___________.

A. look ahead to see where there’s a turn

B. direct the driver when necessary

C. move to the back seat if feeling uncomfortable

D. keep looking at the map to find a place to go to

【2】Why do you need to tell someone your exploration plan before setting out?

A. To be saved in case of an accident.

B. To get information when in danger.

C. To share the fun with him/her in exploration.

D. To tell him/her what’s going on with the group members.

【3】Orienteering activities can______________.

A. make people work fast

B. help people organize other activities

C. help people stay healthy

D. make people get prepared for sports

【4】The text mainly talks about____________.

A. the fun of exploration

B. what to bring for exploration

C. the way to use a map in exploration

D. how to prevent getting lost in exploration

【题目】书面表达（15分）

假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：

1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；

2. 说明你打算参加的原因；

3. 询问对方的意向。

注意： 1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。

提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua