9．The earth was just a cloud of (71)dustafter the Big Bang ．The earth (72)explodedloudly with fire a——青夏教育精英家教网——

9．The earth was just a cloud of （71）dustafter the"Big Bang"．The earth （72）explodedloudly with fire and rock．They were in （73）timeto produce many things，which were to make the earth's atmosphere．As the earth cooled down，water began to appear on its surface．It allowed the earth to dissolve （74）harmfulgases．Then life began to develop．
The first small plants （75）multipliedand filled the oceans and seas with oxygen．This encouraged the （76）developmentof early shellfish and fish．Land animals such as insects，reptiles and dinosaurs and so on appeared after green plants appeared．Small clever animals （77）spreadall over the earth．They are putting too （78）muchcarbon dioxide into the atmosphere，which （79）preventsheat from escaping the earth into space．Whether life will continue on the earth for millions of years to come will （80）dependon whether this problem can be solved．

8．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Kobe Bryant，37，played the final game of his 20-year career in April 14，2016．He ends up with five championships，18All-Star game appearances．He showed a amazing 60points in the 101-96Lakers victory over the Utah Jazz，which was unbelievable．The crazily crowd had great expectations of the final score，cheering and shouted every time Bryant scored during his 42minute．
After the game，he was been given a microphone．So he said he couldn't believe how fast 20years had gone by．He thought the most important part was the whole team stayed together all the time through the ups and downs．Bryant's successful professional career happens not for coincidence but thanks to all the sweating days．

7．注意；关注 n．attention．

6．侄女 n．niece．

5．灰尘 n．dust．

4．出现；发生 v．occur．

3．信号 n．signal．

2．探索 v．explore．

1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Alice，
I have just got a good news to tell you．I win a national prize for painting last week．My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday．I'd like to staying there for half a month，visiting place of interest and practicing my English as well．We've been written to each other for nearly a year now．I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you．I imagine you'll be at vacation yourself by that time．Perhaps you will go out do some sightseeing together．
Best wishes!
Yours
Lily．

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life．
In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．

0 142511 142519 142525 142529 142535 142537 142541 142547 142549 142555 142561 142565 142567 142571 142577 142579 142585 142589 142591 142595 142597 142601 142603 142605 142606 142607 142609 142610 142611 142613 142615 142619 142621 142625 142627 142631 142637 142639 142645 142649 142651 142655 142661 142667 142669 142675 142679 142681 142687 142691 142697 142705 151629