Question

8．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Kobe Bryant，37，played the final game of his 20-year career in April 14，2016．He ends up with five championships，18All-Star game appearances．He showed a amazing 60points in the 101-96Lakers victory over the Utah Jazz，which was unbelievable．The crazily crowd had great expectations of the final score，cheering and shouted every time Bryant scored during his 42minute．
After the game，he was been given a microphone．So he said he couldn't believe how fast 20years had gone by．He thought the most important part was the whole team stayed together all the time through the ups and downs．Bryant's successful professional career happens not for coincidence but thanks to all the sweating days．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要对Kobe Bryant进行介绍，包括其取得的成就．

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1．in改为on，考查介词，在具体某一天使用介词on．
2．ends改为ended，考查时态，短文描述的是过去发生的事情，因此使用一般过去时．
3．a改为an，考查冠词，amazing是以元音音素开头的单词，因此使用冠词an．
4．crazily改为crazy，考查形容词，此处应使用形容词修饰后面的名词crowd．
5．shouted改为shouting，考查非谓语，shout与其逻辑主语crowd构成主动的关系，因此使用现在分词形式．
6．minute改为minutes，考查名词，此处应使用名词复数minutes．
7．been去掉，考查语态，此处使用被动语态be done的形式，been出现了重复．
8．So改为And，考查连词，此处是并别的关系，没有因果关系，因此使用and．
9．was后加that，考查表语从句，表语从句的that一般不省略，因此在was后加that．
10．for改为by，考查固定搭配，by coincidence"巧合"．

点评 短文改错要具备两个基础，一是懂得分析句子结构，二是知道充当各个句子成分的词类或词性．并且注意人称代词，从句的引导词，名词单复数，和全文时态的理解，对于一些固定搭配，平时的学习中要多注意积累．